Thursday, May 1, 2008

*EMPATHY*=^)

WELL IF I WAS IN MY CHARATER SHOES THEY WILL BE KINDA OF STINKY LOL JK WELL I THINK I COULD CAUSE SHE TRYS TO HELP HER BOYFRIEND OUT AND TRY HER BEST TO KEEP HIM OUT OF TRUBLE AND I WILL DO THE SAME THING LIKE THAT I WILL LIKE TO HELP HIM OUT IN HIS LIFE AND THINGS LIKE THAT

2 comments:

brenda said...

well i thinks so to because they will stink alot...i will do the same because i will help the person to..write more... and explain it more

M. Crabtree said...

how did your character need to help her boyfriend out? Do you think your character thought she did the right thing in trying to keep him out of trouble, or is it possible that he might keep her out of trouble? Also, next time, write in the 1st person, like you ARE your main character and you're writing about what happened to you.